Sunday, February 17, 2008

Chicago: O'hare


3 comments:

Mark Malijan / The Emerald Collective said...

Heelllloo style! I'm glad you're keeping your blog regular. Your style shines through so much in it.

I don't know if you know, but your chess came out and it looks great. I heard you are finalist for an internship?

Take care,

Mark

David Kennedy said...

Serge,
Watch the edges, esp. with the image of the escalators at ORD. The clipping of the wheels of the bag at the bottom bugs me a lot. As Artie Morris advises in his workshops: "cut, don't clip." In other words, don't let things bump the edges or make them intentional by cropping tighter. You might consider reining in the left and right sides to eliminate the exit signs. It would leave you with a tighter square. Just $0.02.
Are you back in Chapel Hill now? I'll be in Durham in just a couple weeks.
Cheers,
David

SG said...

nice to get a little constructive crizz David. thanks. man, wish I could meet you in Durham. I'm leaving for an internship in Evansville IN on Feb, 29th.

lets talk soon.

SG